A Desolation Called Peace: Notes on Empire, Identity, and Other Intimacies
After a break of a few days, I returned to Teixcalaan—because it felt like unfinished business. A Desolation Called Peace is the second and final book in Arkady Martine’s duology, and I’d left it unread. That’s not good form when you choose a series precisely because the story arc spans only two books. Not like Dune, or Wheel of Time, or Ender.

The story resumes where it left off. Mahit Dzmare returns to Lsel. Nineteen Adze now wears the imperial crown. Three Seagrass is safely promoted to Third Undersecretary at the Information Ministry. And war with the unknown looms—a war Mahit had once used to save her small space station.
At first glance, it feels like a continuum of political thriller dressed in science fiction. But stay a little longer, and you’ll find the nuances within the story: in the children of empire, the lovers it buries, and the voices it cannot understand. Martine chooses to explore quite a few themes in this book—first contact, communication, restraint as a strategy of war, coming of age, loyalty, and devotion to one’s commanding officer.
Eight Antidote – The Emperor as a Child
Of all the characters, it is Eight Antidote who lingers. A clone of the late emperor Six Direction, bred to rule and taught to perform. He is eleven. But he lives each moment under the shadow of what an emperor should be.
Every conversation, every friendship, every private thought is weighed against the imagined gaze of a predecessor who kept the empire whole for eighty years. And it shows—this boy emperor, half-god, half-hostage, constantly parsing subtext, reading power plays, and trying to be more than a legacy.
What makes his arc remarkable is the quiet moment when he decides to stop performing—and act. Not as an emperor, not as a shadow of Six Direction, but as himself. A child who has learned to wield power. And who might just do it differently.
Lovers and Replacements
In my post on A Memory Called Empire, I had written about Three Seagrass and Twelve Azalea—Reed and Petal—as almost-lovers. Their bond had the elegance of subtext, of glances instead of declarations. And then Martine killed Azalea.
In Desolation, Mahit fills that space. Three Seagrass and Mahit become lovers, explicitly. The sensuality, the desire, the messy need—it’s all there. And while it deepens the relationship, something about it feels… inherited. Or perhaps overwritten.
I found myself wondering, more than once: is this imagination, or experience? Martine’s own identity—queer, married to a woman—inevitably colors the intimacy she writes. That isn’t a criticism, but it does shape the gaze. When desire becomes text, we ask: Who is looking? Who is being seen?
And when a character dies and is replaced—not narratively, but emotionally—it leaves a small echo of something unresolved. Twelve Azalea was never in the frame to be a lover. But his absence haunts it.
The Hivemind – What We Talk About When We Talk About Aliens
The aliens are… a hive. Again.
If you’ve read Ender’s Game, or half a dozen other classic sci-fi titles, you know this song. A collective mind. No singular authority. A way of thinking so foreign it becomes unknowable.
Martine adds layers—literary, philosophical, poetic—but the central concept feels familiar. Even their violence feels abstract. They destroy, but their motives remain slippery. As Twenty Cicadas puts it: Wasteful.
But where Martine redeems this trope is in the collision between Teixcalaanli technology and alien consciousness. The empire already thinks in collectives—the Sunlit, the imago machines, the shard pilots. They already blur the self and the group.
So when Twenty Cicadas eats the fungal conduit and enters the alien “we,” he doesn’t dissolve. He retains shape. And the hive mind, in turn, begins to notice shape too.
That was new. That was strange. That was beautiful.
Nine Hibiscus – Loyalty and Devotion
Nine Hibiscus—fleet commander, warrior, realist. She is far from the imperial core, but more imperial than anyone else. Her actions are bold, her mind clear, her loyalty to the living. If you believe the War Ministry, she has been made fleet commander in charge of engaging with the aliens in order to die for the empire.
If you believe Her Brilliance Nineteen Adze, she has been chosen to lead because she might be smart enough not to die.
Underlying both views is a common belief—that Nine Hibiscus commands not just loyalty, but devotion. And that makes her dangerous in the eyes of the Ministry, especially after a recent coup attempt, which ended with the sacrifice of Six Direction.
But when you read the conversations between Nine Hibiscus and Twenty Cicadas, you realize the loyalty is earned. It comes from years of battlefield wisdom, from her refusal to waste lives. In her previous assignments, and in this one, she wins by avoiding bloodshed. She doesn’t rush into battle with the aliens, even though she has the firepower to do so. She calls for an envoy. She asks for dialogue. And in doing so, she avoids a war that could’ve killed millions.
The Letdown – Lsel, the Space Station
Lsel, for all its imago glory, feels increasingly small—frogs of the well, more concerned with memory than motion. At times, the characters at Lsel are laughable. Imagine a galactic empire with billions of people and multitudes of planets. Then imagine a space station with around thirty thousand people. And the politicians there are plotting to get the empire to self-destruct.
The first time the aliens approach the station, the bravado collapses. The station folds into fear.
Finally…
I loved the book for the new characters it introduced. However, the returning characters felt preoccupied with personal dynamics rather than the existential threat to the empire. That felt odd. Three Seagrass nominates herself to be the envoy because she was bored in a political office and wanted adventure. But once she meets Mahit, most of her time is spent on relationship repair rather than diplomacy. Even when she’s in the thick of first contact, her thoughts circle Mahit—and vice versa.
Teixcalaan sent a diplomat to speak for the empire. What arrived was a woman mid-breakup.
And yet, that too is Teixcalaan: a civilization where poetry and politics are indistinguishable, where performance is power, and where even love becomes imperial.
There are many ways to tell a story about war. Martine chooses intimacy. And that works…